Thursday, December 6, 2012

"Homeplace" by Scott Russell Sanders 2

Seeing 2.

The tone Sanders uses  is similar to the one when you are thinking out loud. You use the simple things to discuss. He compares the truth and the idea of homeplace. When we go somewhere, it is the truth, but when is it the idea of it? The author uses the metaphor. 
I think the tone of his essay is argumentative. He is trying to discover things and ideas on his own, bringing up the thoughts and opinions of others and arguing over them. 
I felt a bit of the sarcasm in his tone, as he describes American building airports, bridges and trails. The most of any nation. I felt sarcasm when he talked about migrants arguing the idea of wheat they brought to native American table and what they took away. 
I think we clearly could pretty loudly hear the voice of the author writing this piece. 
If I would ask somebody to read it out loud, I would have asked them to speak louder as the author expresses his thoughts and come the voice down when the opinions of others are stated. I would notice though it will be quite easy in the beginning to articulate talking about the three tornadoes and the house built on the same spot, but going further it would become much harder. 
If to compare with the essay of Richard Ford, I would say that "At home. For now" is much easy to read and navigate through. It is one of those light reads, stating more of the opinion and expressing the author's own thoughts then stating the argument and going deep into the dark woods. I prefer more compound, more to the core writing with deep reading and discussion, so I like Sanders essay more. Even though I think it will be much easier for public to engage and relate to the Ford's piece.

"Homeplace" by Scott Russell Sanders

Seeing 1.

The first argument that Sanders brings out is in the task of Seeing 1. That "people who root themselves in places are likelier to know and acre for those places than are people who root themselves in ideas." I am somewhat agree and disagree with them. If you have a favorite book, you will be taking care of it, making sure that pages are straightened up and nobody is leaving any marks in the book. But once you do not care about this particular book or hate the subject it discusses, you wont care how the book look or what and who does something to it. The same is to the place. It depends on how the person brought up, what values he or she has, and how careful or careless he or she is to the different things, object, surrounding. 
The author brings up the argument that once you build the foundation, you would rather rebuild on it over and over again no matter what happens with the "construction" that is above that foundation.
As well he mentions that staying put is the result of simple stubbornness of the humans. They invest so much into where they live so it does not matter what climate changes occur, they would rather stay where they were before. It shows another argument called devotion. 
Then Sanders mention how many roads, airports and rails Americans built. But I think it is another sign of the ability of coming back again and again where you have started and staying put in your familiar place. 
He mentions how the migrants bring their own values and tradition to the places they move, but at the same time the ones that stay put cherish and appreciate the importance of those values and traditions that were created by their ancestors and carried them along their lives. Once you move, you carry along yourself the negativeness that might include slavery, smallpox and rats, etc. 
Once you stay put, you value your home; once you move over and over again, you never experience or loose along the way that feeling. 
Once you stay put, you should keep in mind the picture that you see through the window of your place. It means to be aware not only about your surroundings, but the surroundings of the surroundings and so on. 
Sanders brings the argument of the place as the destination of the holy center. He believes that once you sit still there, you might hear what might be heard anywhere. But I think you might have this spot within yourself. It does not have to be a specific location or the spot. It is up to your brain to conquer that challenge. To build around what is important to you. To keep it in your reachable distance. 
Then he mentions about the old woman whose farm was willed to her daughters after her death. But where she lived once alive, they were not any longer. So they let to destroy the farm and build a new shopping plaza out here. But here again we are coming back to the values we have and how we do or do not appreciate things and what is important to us. Whether it is right or wrong, there is no a true answer. Why do they need it if they do not live there? But why would they let destroy it as it is a reminder, or even a memory, of their mother?
Some to live freely and happily have to have a place, where they could find their own themselves. Others are eager to find this within their own "I." What is right and what is wrong strictly depends on your particular nature!

The author defines being settled as "when we cease to be migrants and become inhabitants, we might begin to pay enough heed and respect to where we are. By settling in, we have a chance of making a durable home for ourselves, our fellow creatures, and our descendants." I think the main idea here is when you transform from the migrant to the inhabitant, you will be considered settled. 
Being an inhabitant he describes as someone who has a commitment to any given place. The one who is intimate with his/her home region, knows the territory, understands the life as the local does. But at the same time encounters that there is a diversity of other places, cultures, ways. And you are not able to understand that truth until you travel or move around at least for a short period of time. But every time you come back home to rest and put your body to rest.
Being placed in his understanding has a meaning of not having a place to call home. You just wonder around the world without the final of that marathon, without the rest area with your own couch or crib. You have no ability to compare what is yours and how everybody else does. You are just a sightseer. The author see danger in those individuals not only to their parish but to the planet.  

The author uses numerous sources from different epochs and times of the existence of our or ancient civilizations. I think those phrases, opinions and researches bring new view and idea of the subject and give him the new soil for discussion, expressing his ideas or arguing over a point of particular view. I think they used wisely as "mentions", but supported by personal view of Sanders. What concerns me I would might bring few quotes of different people to see their view on a subject, but it is another aspect of that discussion.

At the end I would just bring the example from my personal life. My grandma has spent all her entire live in her homecountry. She has not even travelled as far as a city or village apart where she lives now. Once she was a village/farm girl until she got married and moved to the city. To my request to come visit me in USA, she simply said, "I am a home girl. And not flying anywhere." Is it the example of that "stubbornness" Sanders is talking about? I would definitely say so. But let her once to find out, that her only granddaughter is expecting a child, and we will see how fast she gets to know an aircraft. 

Thursday, November 29, 2012

No Impact Man

What brings me happiness during celebrations like birthdays, holidays, etc.?

Hm... That is an interesting question! Well what concerns birthday celebrations, I just hate them. Mine in particular. Every year I could not wait for that day to be over with. Mainly because you are not getting any younger and have to add another number to your age. By the way, I am sixteen during the last 10 years already ;-). Then I have such various friends, so get them in the same room is quite a challenge. Even though I find a common language with each and every one of them when we are one on one and consider everyone a unique personality, putting them together does not work that easy. Simply because they can not find a common language and have a crucial amount of different interests. So every year I wait for this day to come and get over it as soon as possible. 
What brings me happiness though?... I love when New Years Day coming to the end, you are going to bed being anxious for the Santa to come while you are asleep, you turn off the lights... the only thing you could see is Christmas lights in the windows and in this silence you feel how the last strangers are walking in the streets and you could hear how their winter felt boots squeak in the snow. This noise gets me into a different state of mind and, while my body is falling asleep, I could still hear those sounds of the squeakiness. It is almost like magic is in the air, outside the street, but you are missing on it. Until you wake up later and the story repeats itself again. 
When the family gets together for the holidays, you happen to escape in the washing room for a second. And, i am sorry, but while you are sitting on the toilet all alone, you could hear the noise coming from the family room. Somebody argues, the other tells a joke or an interesting story... You can not really hear what they are saying, but that noise put you in a place of happiness that everybody is right there. Just behind that wall. And it brings happiness to your mind and soul.
The other thing I really enjoy is how the Frost draws images on the windows. Those strange unique snowflakes... You catch yourself on looking at them and smiling... :-)
Enough of the good stuff. Back to No Impact Man.

Can I just say right away that I hated it from the beginning till the very end?! If it was not something that I have to watch for class, long time ago I would have stopped that insanity and switched the channel. While watching it, something inside of me was just protesting every moment of that clip. My anger was growing with each scene. Why? I think every one of us has a choice. To do particular things or do not. To play the "russian roulette" and do not. To watch TV or not. To use the electricity or not. To use cloth or "new era" diapers. I could go on and on with this list. But everything that has ever been invented on Earth has a reason for that invention. And when some things are getting lost in oblivion or obscurity, there is a reason for that. Some will do it faster, the others later. But eventually they will. On the other hand it is, in my opinion, important to respect the choice of others and not to roll your eyes seeing some nonsense going on in front your eyes. But, listen, we pass the ancient times and live in a civil society of light, transportation, garbage etc. What it is necessary to do is to be more cautious and accurate about the environment and those who inherit it. 
So here we are on a journey with the Beavan family in New York City. 

... to be continued...  

Wednesday, November 14, 2012

The Onion Exercise

For the Onion Exercise I chose the article named "Dwight Howard Makes Talking Look Almost Effortless During Lakers Press Conference"(see below for the actual media). I love sports, so no wonder article that caught my eye was the one dedicated to basketball. Knowing Dwight Howard from his Orlando Magic years and actually seeing him live on the court as well as watching the press conferences with his participation or reading media pieces written about him, I was not surprised by the way he was satirized/presented by the author. The way Howard acts in public and his smack talk about his former coach and team is the proof to it. I might agree that it is to the certain extent exaggerated by the media, but overall the critique/satire is quite in place. 

The article mainly concentrates on the norms of the behavior in public, about the behavior of that particular person, and what light the athletes should or should not present themselves as public speakers and examples for the others. 

Few statements were true in the article: Dwight Howard is really a Laker now; season opener game for Lakers was really on Tuesday; Howard is a true center basketball player.

As well our assignment for this exercise included finding an item that might be associated with the theme of the article. First thing that appeared in my mind was a basketball ball I had at home. A true NBA certified ball. It really resonates with the piece of media and really helps me remember about one another. But as our professor mentioned, there should be a few items she "stored" in the building. So I found this item (see attached picture). It has nothing to do with the article itself, but it gets my attention in the direction that something is really behind those close door. It may be, you do not have to be a regular-minded person to see it. 


Thursday, November 8, 2012

"A Waitress at Duval's Restaurant" P.-A. Renoir

I love art in general. Looking at the paintings takes usually quite some time for me. In general I am not a fan of realism, I prefer the masterpieces of artists where you need to spend quite some time in front of the painting to get your sense out of it or to understand the author's approach. What I like about creations of the impressionists is their ability of creating their works by using the quick brush strokes. This technique really allows them to create the unique blends of colors. I find this quite fascinating.

In the suggested painting of Renoir we see the waitress of Duval's restaurant. At first  when I looked at the girl, my attention went towards her eyes. The little black dots on her face. In the beginning I thought that she was looking right at me, but when I really looked into her eyes, it seemed that the waitress was looking right passed me. In the depth of the unknown world. In the middle of nowhere. Slightly bending her head, she was almost visiting the other world that she might see behind the restaurant itself, behind the picture she actually saw in front of her... room full of guests, eating their supper or discussing politics with the glass of whiskey. I feel like she looks beyond this festivities, evaluating her role in this particular moment, in this place, in the world. It seems time to time that she is dull, while at times I might see that she has a slightly noticeable smile. Her hand on the waist is a sign of so-called power over the situation or guests needs. The painting is in dull colors. The curtain matches the waitress's apron, while her color the color of the wallpaper.

I do not think that my perspective has changed after reading the poem. I am willing to say, that the author has his own approach of understanding the painting. So do I have my own. Plus both creations were written in different times in world history, so I would assume that both authors have never met each other. So they are really coming out of their own perspective of one another. 

Wednesday, October 31, 2012

"The Americano Dream" Angela M. Balcita

Being a personal narrative, this text has an interesting structure. I would suggest it might be either chronological or spatial essay. It is chronological, because the author encounters things that happen with her and her dad and they depend on particular timeline. At the same time miss Balcita might use the spatial structure as her order depends on what she encounters first, second, third (dreaming, making dreams come true, reality of them, living in reality, how that reality hits you etc.). 
The author compares a lot of things and uses the "if" effect. 
It is funny how she mentions the accent and how each immigrant can have distinguish sounds pronouncing particular words (i always compare "ranch" and "runch", "Buffalo" and "Byffalo" etc.). The subject of her essay is immigration and which way/ways it is affecting people. That is where her focus is. She evaluates the consequences of the immigration/moving to a different country, adjusting to that new world of unknown, the ability of getting used to live in it either bringing something of your own or blending with something that already exists there. 
Miss Balcita uses repetition (10) and dialogues (1, 4, 7, 8, 14). In the dialogues we could really hear her voice and its tone. At the same time the tone of the essay is somehow nostalgic in my opinion. 
There are 14 paragraphs in the essay.     
Her ideas include what really matters to her. Particular things that have significant meaning. Like the place you live, the clothes you wear and where you shop, accent, sports you begin to like/follow, things that scare or surprise you... Things that you have dreamed of as a part of you "americano dream" and the ones that became a part of your "american reality."

After the class discussion, appeared that our professor introduced us to the new style of writing called creative non-fiction. This creation is one of them. The paragraphs in the text separated by stanzas. Elements that suggest the main idea of the text are in bold and can be read in different ways. The author goes out of her way to compare the truth and the reality. The truth is the process of the naturalization, when the rest is just a dream. This essay shows how the author grows throughout the process of creating this piece which is the most significant part of writing.

"The Onion" article I chose

Dwight Howard Makes Talking Look Almost Effortless During Lakers Press Conference 

OCTOBER 27, 2012 | ISSUE 48•44 | MORE SPORTS NEWS IN BRIEF 


LOS ANGELES—Following a team practice Friday, sources confirmed that new Lakers center Dwight Howard gave an inspiring press conference performance in which he made talking look practically effortless. “He was running his mouth better than ever out there,” said Los Angeles Times reporter Helene Elliott, adding that Howard is “just a total natural” when it comes to incessantly rambling about winning NBA championships. “Having spent so much time out injured, everyone was a little worried that Dwight might not be able to blather on and on at the same level he once did, but he silenced any of those concerns right away with a few arrogant and self-involved comments. His mouth was moving so fluidly that it was like he wasn’t even trying. It was amazing to watch.” At press time, Howard was preparing for Tuesday night’s opening-season press conference by practicing forced smiles and fake laughter in front of a locker-room mirror.